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[hobbes]

Programme about bears, Polar and Grizzly on BBC2 RIGHT NOW!

[WOM]

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Should be a semicolon where you've used a comma, I believe. Could cause all sorts of confusion as it stands.

[Femme Folle]

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No, a comma is appropriate, but he should have inserted a second one after the word 'Grizzly'.

[Femme Folle]

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So it would be "Programme about bears on BBC2 RIGHT NOW!"

What kind of bears, you ask?

Why, Polar and Grizzly, of course.

[Femme Folle]

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It's probably over by now, you know.

[DCI Harry Batt]

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Thanks!

I was warned erlier in the week and recorded it. So will watch it lter.

I hope those grizzly cunts kept their necks wound in.

[EIM]

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Is your 'a' key all right?

[Femme Folle]

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After giving it some thought, I probably would have written it thusly:

Programme about bears, Polar and Grizzly, on BBC2 RIGHT NOW!

[DCI Harry Batt]

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"thus", surely?

My "a" seems ok now, maybe it was just a bit tired earlier.

[Femme Folle]

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Are you seriously correcting me when I was deliberately being silly?

Seriously? Rebecca.

[DCI Harry Batt]

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No, I was deadpanning. Honest guv.

[Femme Folle]

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And don't call me Shirley.