I want to be a published fiction writer, but I have a problem with discipline. I know that I need to write every day, even if it's awful. I know this. But I don't always make myself find time for it. So I thought that signing up for an online class would stimulate me and help me develop good habits. I wanted to take an in-person class, but that would give me too many opportunities to find excuses not to go (I'm working on becoming a hermit), so the online format works well for me.
I paid a lot of money for this class (by a lot, I mean $350), and so far, I have been a little unimpressed by the feedback I am getting from my instructor. Our assignments so far have all been limited to no more than 500 words, which, depending on what you're writing, is not very much at all.
Anyway, the instructor is supposed to comment on our assignments and offer suggestions to help us write better, but the only comments she has left me were like the ones I would get from friends (i.e., "Nice job", etc.). While this is flattering, I know that my writing is not perfect. Maybe the class was not the right one for me to take for what I wanted to get out of it (i.e., taking a general cooking class when what you really wanted to learn is how to bake cakes. Mmmmmm...cake.)
If I posted the assignments, would you, dear OTF readers, do me the honor of providing honest critique--the way my instructor should be? I want to know what you like (about my writing style, my dialogue, my subject matter, etc.), and what you don't like. I need to learn what needs more work (i.e., have I described something in enough detail?, is my dialogue stiff and unnatural?, etc.). I would be expecting no less than brutal honesty.
I don't mind if anyone would also like to take the piss, but please balance it with serious comments too. I really don't want to be in insurance for the rest of my working days (or until the end of my life, whichever comes first). And even if it never provides a livable income for me, it would feel great as a personal accomplishment to have a published book under my belt. I want to get serious about writing, but I first need to find my way. I don't want to write one of those crappy books that my friends all say they love just because I wrote it and they don't want to hurt my feelings (I have one such book on my bookshelf--and no, it was not written by anyone on OTF)
Would anyone here be willing to help me with this? If I get any positive replies, I will post up the first assignment, along with what I wrote for it.
Also, if anyone else would like to use this thread for the same purpose, that would be welcomed.
I paid a lot of money for this class (by a lot, I mean $350), and so far, I have been a little unimpressed by the feedback I am getting from my instructor. Our assignments so far have all been limited to no more than 500 words, which, depending on what you're writing, is not very much at all.
Anyway, the instructor is supposed to comment on our assignments and offer suggestions to help us write better, but the only comments she has left me were like the ones I would get from friends (i.e., "Nice job", etc.). While this is flattering, I know that my writing is not perfect. Maybe the class was not the right one for me to take for what I wanted to get out of it (i.e., taking a general cooking class when what you really wanted to learn is how to bake cakes. Mmmmmm...cake.)
If I posted the assignments, would you, dear OTF readers, do me the honor of providing honest critique--the way my instructor should be? I want to know what you like (about my writing style, my dialogue, my subject matter, etc.), and what you don't like. I need to learn what needs more work (i.e., have I described something in enough detail?, is my dialogue stiff and unnatural?, etc.). I would be expecting no less than brutal honesty.
I don't mind if anyone would also like to take the piss, but please balance it with serious comments too. I really don't want to be in insurance for the rest of my working days (or until the end of my life, whichever comes first). And even if it never provides a livable income for me, it would feel great as a personal accomplishment to have a published book under my belt. I want to get serious about writing, but I first need to find my way. I don't want to write one of those crappy books that my friends all say they love just because I wrote it and they don't want to hurt my feelings (I have one such book on my bookshelf--and no, it was not written by anyone on OTF)
Would anyone here be willing to help me with this? If I get any positive replies, I will post up the first assignment, along with what I wrote for it.
Also, if anyone else would like to use this thread for the same purpose, that would be welcomed.
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